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For me it's ok (I am not a native speaker though, which is the reason the typos are there to begin with). Johann > htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html | 16 ++++++++-------- > 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html > index 9509487c..21d33db8 100644 > --- a/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html > +++ b/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html > @@ -696,13 +696,13 @@ a work-in-progress.

>

AVR

>
    >
  • On AVR64* and AVR128* devices, read-only data is now located in program > - memory per default and no more in RAM. > + memory per default and no longer in RAM. >
      >
    • Only a 32 KiB block of program memory can be used to store > and access .rodata in that way. Which block is used can be selected > - by defining symbol __flmap. > + by defining the symbol __flmap. > As an alternative, the byte address of the block can be specified > - by symbol __RODATA_FLASH_START__ which takes > + by the symbol __RODATA_FLASH_START__ which takes > precedence over __flmap. > For example, linking with > -Wl,--defsym,__RODATA_FLASH_START__=32k > @@ -715,9 +715,9 @@ a work-in-progress.

      > href="https://github.com/avrdudes/avr-libc/issues/931">#931 > can be used. The latter initializes NVMCTRL_CTRLB.FLMAP > in the startup code and according to the value > - of __flmap resp. > + of __flmap or > __RODATA_FLASH_START__.
      • > -
    • When AVR-LibC with #931 is used, then defining symbol > +
    • When AVR-LibC with #931 is used, then defining the symbol > __flmap_lock to a non-zero value will set bit > NVMCTRL_CTRLB.FLMAPLOCK. This will protect > NVMCTRL_CTRLB.FLMAP from any further changes — > @@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ a work-in-progress.

      > can be used:
      >   __asm (".global __flmap_lock"  "\n\t"
>          "__flmap_lock = 1");
      • > -
    • When you do not want the code from #931, then define global > +
    • When you do not want the code from #931, then define a global > symbol __do_flmap_init and the linker will not pull in > that code from libmcu.a any more.
      • >
    • In order to return to the old placement of read-only data in RAM, > @@ -736,7 +736,7 @@ __asm (".global __flmap_lock" "\n\t" > functionality. >
      • >
    • Read-only data is located in output section .rodata, > - wheras it is part of .text when located in RAM.
      • > + whereas it is part of .text when located in RAM. >
    • The feature is only available when the compiler is configured > with a version of Binutils that implements > PR31124, which is the > @@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ __asm (".global __flmap_lock" "\n\t" >
    • > On the Reduced Tiny devices, > the meaning of register constraint "w" has been changed. > - It containts now the registers R24…R31 like it is the case for all > + It now constrains the registers R24…R31 as is the case for all > the other devices. >
      • >