On 7 May 2011 22:33, Gerald Pfeifer <gerald@pfeifer.com> wrote:
> On Fri, 6 May 2011, Jonathan Wakely wrote:
>> 2011-05-06  Jonathan Wakely  <jwakely.gcc@gmail.com>
>>
>>         * doc/invoke.texi (-fuse-linker-plugin): Improve grammar.
>>
>> I was going to commit a smaller version of this patch as obvious (just
>> the second of the three hunks in the patch) but I spotted a few other
>> improvements that could be made. I think my changes preserve the
>> intended meaning, but improve the English slightly and (I hope)
>> clarify it.
>
> This looks good, thank you!  (Some of the lines touched seem a bit
> long? Perhaps wrap them?)

Done.

>> Would removing "do" from "and shared libraries that do use hidden
>> visibility" be a further improvement?
>
> That I better leave to the native speakers here. :-)

I made the call and removed the "do", and committed the attached
version to trunk.

Thanks,

Jonathan

2011-05-08  Jonathan Wakely  <jwakely.gcc@gmail.com>

        * doc/invoke.texi (-fuse-linker-plugin): Improve grammar.