From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (qmail 10529 invoked by alias); 7 May 2011 23:18:24 -0000 Received: (qmail 10520 invoked by uid 22791); 7 May 2011 23:18:23 -0000 X-SWARE-Spam-Status: No, hits=-2.4 required=5.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,FREEMAIL_FROM,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW,RFC_ABUSE_POST X-Spam-Check-By: sourceware.org Received: from mail-pz0-f47.google.com (HELO mail-pz0-f47.google.com) (209.85.210.47) by sourceware.org (qpsmtpd/0.43rc1) with ESMTP; Sat, 07 May 2011 23:18:08 +0000 Received: by pzk36 with SMTP id 36so2209842pzk.20 for ; Sat, 07 May 2011 16:18:07 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.142.154.13 with SMTP id b13mr2694341wfe.161.1304810287230; Sat, 07 May 2011 16:18:07 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.142.114.13 with HTTP; Sat, 7 May 2011 16:18:07 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: Date: Sat, 07 May 2011 23:49:00 -0000 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [patch] fix typos and grammar in -fuse-linker-plugin docs From: Jonathan Wakely To: Gerald Pfeifer Cc: gcc-patches Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=000e0cd20d92ab6fc104a2b7d14c Mailing-List: contact gcc-patches-help@gcc.gnu.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Id: List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: Sender: gcc-patches-owner@gcc.gnu.org X-SW-Source: 2011-05/txt/msg00589.txt.bz2 --000e0cd20d92ab6fc104a2b7d14c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-length: 1049 On 7 May 2011 22:33, Gerald Pfeifer wrote: > On Fri, 6 May 2011, Jonathan Wakely wrote: >> 2011-05-06 =A0Jonathan Wakely =A0 >> >> =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 * doc/invoke.texi (-fuse-linker-plugin): Improve grammar. >> >> I was going to commit a smaller version of this patch as obvious (just >> the second of the three hunks in the patch) but I spotted a few other >> improvements that could be made. I think my changes preserve the >> intended meaning, but improve the English slightly and (I hope) >> clarify it. > > This looks good, thank you! =A0(Some of the lines touched seem a bit > long? Perhaps wrap them?) Done. >> Would removing "do" from "and shared libraries that do use hidden >> visibility" be a further improvement? > > That I better leave to the native speakers here. :-) I made the call and removed the "do", and committed the attached version to trunk. 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