On 22/10/2023 13:24, Gerald Pfeifer wrote:
> Hi Andrew,
> 
> On Fri, 20 Oct 2023, Andrew Stubbs wrote:
>>>   Additionally, I wonder whether "Fiji" should be changed to "Fiji
>>> (gfx803)" in the first line and whether the  "," should be removed in
>>> "The ... configuration ... , and no longer includes".
>> Fair enough, how's this version? (I like the comma, even if it is optional.)
> 
> it's definitely fine. I do have a recommendation and a question, though
> feel free to go about them as you prefer.
> 
> +  <li>The default device architecture is now <code>gfx900</code> (Vega).</li>
> 
> How about starting with this as the first sub-item, as a "positive",
> then follow with the deprecation?
> 
> +<ul>
> +  <li>
> +    The Fiji (gfx803) device support is now deprecated and will be removed from
> 
> Could this be "Fiji (gfx803) device support" without the article?

Thank you for your suggestions; I have committed the attached.

Andrew