From: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
To: Joel Brobecker <brobecker@adacore.com>
Cc: gdb-patches@sourceware.org
Subject: Re: [RFA/doco] document support for Ravenscar profile
Date: Fri, 24 Sep 2010 14:42:00 -0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <83sk0ztwou.fsf@gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20100923215639.GE3007@adacore.com>
> Date: Thu, 23 Sep 2010 14:56:39 -0700
> From: Joel Brobecker <brobecker@adacore.com>
> Cc: gdb-patches@sourceware.org
>
> > This part is okay, but please add a sentence pointing to the new
> > section in the manual which describes the details.
>
> I've added a quick sentence. Let me know if this enough.
It's enough, thanks.
> Also, I should say that I deliberately avoided listing the new
> commands in the NEWS files, because I think they are pretty obscure
> and only likely to be used in emergency situations.
Yes, I agree.
> > Instead of 2 @cindex entries, I'd just leave one:
> >
> > @cindex task switching with program using Ravenscar Profile
>
> Changed accordingly. I am wondering whether it would sound better
> if we add 'the' before 'Ravenscar Profile'.
Actually, index entries should be as short as possible, and don't have
to be complete sentences, so
@cindex task switching, and Ravenscar Profile
is even better. The idea is to have all the necessary keywords that a
reader might think about, and minimum general words beyond that.
> Here is a new version.
It's fine with me, thanks.
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2010-09-24 7:42 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2010-09-23 22:37 Joel Brobecker
2010-09-23 23:55 ` Eli Zaretskii
2010-09-23 23:20 ` Joel Brobecker
2010-09-24 14:42 ` Eli Zaretskii [this message]
2010-09-29 10:17 ` Joel Brobecker
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