From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (qmail 8284 invoked by alias); 24 Sep 2010 07:42:21 -0000 Received: (qmail 8272 invoked by uid 22791); 24 Sep 2010 07:42:20 -0000 X-SWARE-Spam-Status: No, hits=-0.7 required=5.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00,SPF_SOFTFAIL X-Spam-Check-By: sourceware.org Received: from mtaout20.012.net.il (HELO mtaout20.012.net.il) (80.179.55.166) by sourceware.org (qpsmtpd/0.43rc1) with ESMTP; Fri, 24 Sep 2010 07:42:15 +0000 Received: from conversion-daemon.a-mtaout20.012.net.il by a-mtaout20.012.net.il (HyperSendmail v2007.08) id <0L9800E00QNOWR00@a-mtaout20.012.net.il> for gdb-patches@sourceware.org; Fri, 24 Sep 2010 09:41:49 +0200 (IST) Received: from HOME-C4E4A596F7 ([77.127.203.3]) by a-mtaout20.012.net.il (HyperSendmail v2007.08) with ESMTPA id <0L9800E9AQPOM620@a-mtaout20.012.net.il>; Fri, 24 Sep 2010 09:41:49 +0200 (IST) Date: Fri, 24 Sep 2010 14:42:00 -0000 From: Eli Zaretskii Subject: Re: [RFA/doco] document support for Ravenscar profile In-reply-to: <20100923215639.GE3007@adacore.com> To: Joel Brobecker Cc: gdb-patches@sourceware.org Reply-to: Eli Zaretskii Message-id: <83sk0ztwou.fsf@gnu.org> References: <1285272848-15942-1-git-send-email-brobecker@adacore.com> <83zkv8tcx8.fsf@gnu.org> <20100923215639.GE3007@adacore.com> X-IsSubscribed: yes Mailing-List: contact gdb-patches-help@sourceware.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: , Sender: gdb-patches-owner@sourceware.org X-SW-Source: 2010-09/txt/msg00431.txt.bz2 > Date: Thu, 23 Sep 2010 14:56:39 -0700 > From: Joel Brobecker > Cc: gdb-patches@sourceware.org > > > This part is okay, but please add a sentence pointing to the new > > section in the manual which describes the details. > > I've added a quick sentence. Let me know if this enough. It's enough, thanks. > Also, I should say that I deliberately avoided listing the new > commands in the NEWS files, because I think they are pretty obscure > and only likely to be used in emergency situations. Yes, I agree. > > Instead of 2 @cindex entries, I'd just leave one: > > > > @cindex task switching with program using Ravenscar Profile > > Changed accordingly. I am wondering whether it would sound better > if we add 'the' before 'Ravenscar Profile'. Actually, index entries should be as short as possible, and don't have to be complete sentences, so @cindex task switching, and Ravenscar Profile is even better. The idea is to have all the necessary keywords that a reader might think about, and minimum general words beyond that. > Here is a new version. It's fine with me, thanks.