* [pushed] wwwdocs: gcc-12: Simplify a sentence in the OpenMP section
@ 2023-02-18 22:32 Gerald Pfeifer
2023-02-18 22:36 ` NightStrike
0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Gerald Pfeifer @ 2023-02-18 22:32 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: gcc-patches; +Cc: Tobias Burnus
That was a bit too much in terms of additions things. :-)
Pushed.
Gerald
---
htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
index 32403579..fd4062e6 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
<ul>
<li>OpenMP 5.0 support has been extended: The <code>close</code> map
modifier and the <code>affinity</code> clause are now supported.
- In addition Fortran gained additionally the following features which were
+ In addition Fortran gained the following features which were
available in C and C++ before: <code>declare variant</code> is now
available, <code>depobj</code>, <code>mutexinoutset</code> and
<code>iterator</code> can now also be used with the <code>depend</code>
--
2.39.1
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2023-02-18 22:32 [pushed] wwwdocs: gcc-12: Simplify a sentence in the OpenMP section Gerald Pfeifer
@ 2023-02-18 22:36 ` NightStrike
2023-02-19 0:12 ` Gerald Pfeifer
0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: NightStrike @ 2023-02-18 22:36 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Gerald Pfeifer; +Cc: GCC Patches, Tobias Burnus
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On Sat, Feb 18, 2023, 17:32 Gerald Pfeifer <gerald@pfeifer.com> wrote:
> That was a bit too much in terms of additions things. :-)
>
> Pushed.
>
> Gerald
> ---
> htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html | 2 +-
> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
> index 32403579..fd4062e6 100644
> --- a/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
> +++ b/htdocs/gcc-12/changes.html
> @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ You may also want to check out our
> <ul>
> <li>OpenMP 5.0 support has been extended: The <code>close</code> map
> modifier and the <code>affinity</code> clause are now supported.
> - In addition Fortran gained additionally the following features
> which were
> + In addition Fortran gained the following features which were
>
Missing a comma after "in addition" and "features". For the latter, "x that
y" > no comma. "X, which y" > comma. For the former, it's required to
separate the prepositional phrase from the subject.
>
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* Re: [pushed] wwwdocs: gcc-12: Simplify a sentence in the OpenMP section
2023-02-18 22:36 ` NightStrike
@ 2023-02-19 0:12 ` Gerald Pfeifer
0 siblings, 0 replies; 3+ messages in thread
From: Gerald Pfeifer @ 2023-02-19 0:12 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: NightStrike; +Cc: gcc-patches, Tobias Burnus
On Sat, 18 Feb 2023, NightStrike wrote:
> Missing a comma after "in addition" and "features". For the latter, "x that
> y" > no comma. "X, which y" > comma. For the former, it's required to
> separate the prepositional phrase from the subject.
Thanks, and good point. I'll take care of all "In addition"s throughout
all of wwwdocs.
Gerald
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